Children of Vaelinya · Valen · 6 of 8

Vaelinya artwork used as the header image for this story in the initial web edition.

Valen and the Silent Bard

The visiting bard arrived with a box of painted cards and a note on the lid:

VOICE REST TODAY.

Maer Tovin pointed to the note, then to his throat, then opened the box.

Inside were painted scenes: a river, a cart, three geese, a red hat, a bridge, a crooked house, a black dog and a woman holding an enormous spoon.

Valen leaned over the cards.

“Do you want someone else to tell the story?”

Tovin shook his head.

He handed Valen another note:

AUDIENCE MAY DESCRIBE. I CHOOSE THE ORDER.

That was clearer.

The performance would happen in the small hall after lunch. Tovin usually told stories aloud, shifting voices and rhythms so quickly that children tried to guess which character would interrupt next. Today, word had already spread that he could not speak.

Some people assumed the performance would be cancelled.

Others assumed Valen would narrate for him.

Valen had assumed that too for approximately three seconds.

Tovin had corrected the assumption without saying a word.

Before the audience came in, he arranged several small boards beside his chair:

AGAIN

NOT YET

DESCRIBE WHAT YOU SEE

WAIT

YES

NO

Then he added a blank slate and chalk for anything the prepared boards could not cover.

Valen asked, “Do you want me beside you?”

Tovin considered, then wrote:

YES. MOVE CARDS ONLY IF I ASK.

Valen sat beside the low table.

When the hall filled, Maer Siva explained only the practical rule.

“Tovin is resting his voice. He will run the story with cards and notes. Follow his invitations.”

Nobody announced that silence made the performance deeper, purer or mysterious.

It was simply how Tovin was working today.

He began with the river card.

A child in the front row said, “A river.”

Tovin held up DESCRIBE WHAT YOU SEE.

“Blue river,” someone added.

“Fast river.”

“Two rocks.”

“Something red near the bank.”

Tovin nodded and placed the cart card beside it.

“A cart crossing the river,” Valen said.

Tovin lifted NOT YET.

Valen stopped.

He looked again.

The cart was beside the river card. Nothing showed it crossing.

“A cart beside the river,” Valen corrected.

Tovin nodded.

Then came the geese.

Three painted geese stood in a row with their beaks open.

“They are shouting at the cart,” Pela said.

“They are singing,” Bram said.

“They are just painted with open beaks,” Valen said.

Tovin pointed at him, then at YES.

Bram frowned.

“So we cannot guess anything?”

Tovin wrote on the slate:

YOU CAN GUESS. LABEL IT AS A GUESS.

Bram brightened.

“I guess they are shouting at the cart.”

Pela said, “I guess they are shouting at Bram.”

The audience laughed.

Tovin placed the red hat card upside down.

Valen immediately saw a possible story. The hat had fallen into the river. The cart driver had lost it. The geese would chase it.

He could feel the connections forming before Tovin had offered any.

“Maybe the—”

Tovin raised WAIT.

Valen closed his mouth.

Tovin turned the red hat card right way up, then placed the black dog beside it.

Now the audience produced five different guesses.

The dog owned the hat.

The dog had stolen the hat.

The dog was guarding the hat.

The hat was actually a very small tent.

Tovin accepted none of them as fact.

He also did not reject the fun of guessing.

He simply kept control of what appeared next.

When the bridge card came out, Valen thought he finally understood the connection. He changed his sentence before speaking.

“The bridge is beside the geese now.”

Tovin nodded.

That was enough.

Halfway through the performance, one child asked Tovin a direct question.

“Is the woman with the spoon the dog’s owner?”

Tovin looked through his prepared boards.

None fit.

He took the slate and wrote:

NOT SAYING YET.

The child accepted this.

Valen noticed something important. The absence of speech had not removed Tovin’s ability to withhold information, correct people, change pace, or decide when a question would be answered.

His authorship had not transferred to whoever spoke most confidently in the room.

Then the cards became harder.

Tovin placed the crooked house beside the river, moved the cart behind it, removed the bridge completely, and put the red hat on top of the geese.

Bram stared.

“You have broken the story.”

Tovin grinned.

Pela said, “Maybe it was never the story we thought.”

Valen felt a strong desire to explain that sentence to everyone.

He did not.

Tovin pointed to DESCRIBE WHAT YOU SEE.

Valen said, “The bridge is gone from the table. The cart is behind the house. The hat card is above the geese.”

“Which means?” someone asked.

Valen looked at Tovin.

Tovin had not invited meaning yet.

“Which means that is where the cards are now,” Valen said.

Tovin gave him an exaggerated approving nod.

At last, the bridge returned. The geese stood on it. The red hat floated down the painted river. The cart appeared on the opposite bank. The woman with the spoon sat on the cart. The dog remained beside the crooked house.

Tovin held up AGAIN.

The audience described the final arrangement from the beginning.

This time people separated observation from guess more easily.

“There are three geese on the bridge.”

“The red hat is in the river.”

“I guess the woman threw it.”

“I guess the geese stole it.”

“I guess the dog is the only sensible person.”

Tovin bowed his head solemnly at that one.

The audience laughed.

The story ended without spoken narration from its author.

Nobody knew whether every guess matched what Tovin had imagined.

That did not make the performance incomplete.

Afterward, Valen helped return the cards to their box.

He asked, “Was it frustrating not to speak?”

Tovin wrote:

YES.

Then beneath it:

THE CARDS WERE STILL MINE.

Valen nodded.

“Did we tell the story you meant?”

Tovin thought for a long moment.

Then wrote:

YOU HELPED MAKE TODAY’S VERSION. I STILL CHOSE WHAT I GAVE YOU.

Valen read the line twice.

That was more interesting than a simple yes.

He asked, “Was the dog the sensible one?”

Tovin stared at him.

Then he took the NOT YET board and placed it on top of the closed box.

Valen laughed.

Before leaving, Tovin added one final line to the lid note:

TOMORROW I MAY TALK TOO MUCH.

The next afternoon, he did.

Valen heard him from the corridor before he even reached the hall.

Tovin was telling three people, at great volume, that the geese had been misunderstood.

Valen stopped in the doorway.

“So now you will explain the red hat?”

Tovin pointed at him.

“No.”

His voice was rough but delighted.

Valen smiled.

That meaning needed no interpreter either.